Hi, Jennifer what a cute story. I wasn't sure what or who your were talking about in this story until the end. At first I thought you were talking about a child. Made me want to read further to find out who or what you were talking about. It was hard to read because it wasn't zoomed in. I have trouble making my writing post readable too.
I love how you didn't let us know what you were writing about until the end! It had me guessing. At first I thought it was a child, then a dog. I can totally relate to the mess that animals make! It makes me want to hear more. I think this could be an idea that gives lots of ideas... a series of happenings of your Guiniea Pig.
Ha ha ha! I thought at first it was a small child, then a dog (cause my dog does the same thing). I never would have thought a guinea pig was tipping over her food dish! This is almost like starting in the middle and spreading to the beginning.
The ending of this story caught me by surprise. I assumed you were talking about a cat, but looking back, I'm not sure why I made that assumption! Funny! I think you picked a fun detail about your pet to discuss. I also liked that you didn't say it was a guinea pig until the end. How long have you had your guinea pig? Has this always happened? You mentioned have trouble coming up with writing ideas....are there other mishaps or adventures you could share about your guinea pig?
Hi, Jennifer what a cute story. I wasn't sure what or who your were talking about in this story until the end. At first I thought you were talking about a child. Made me want to read further to find out who or what you were talking about. It was hard to read because it wasn't zoomed in. I have trouble making my writing post readable too.
ReplyDeleteI love how you didn't let us know what you were writing about until the end! It had me guessing. At first I thought it was a child, then a dog. I can totally relate to the mess that animals make! It makes me want to hear more. I think this could be an idea that gives lots of ideas... a series of happenings of your Guiniea Pig.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha! I thought at first it was a small child, then a dog (cause my dog does the same thing). I never would have thought a guinea pig was tipping over her food dish! This is almost like starting in the middle and spreading to the beginning.
ReplyDeleteThe ending of this story caught me by surprise. I assumed you were talking about a cat, but looking back, I'm not sure why I made that assumption! Funny! I think you picked a fun detail about your pet to discuss. I also liked that you didn't say it was a guinea pig until the end. How long have you had your guinea pig? Has this always happened? You mentioned have trouble coming up with writing ideas....are there other mishaps or adventures you could share about your guinea pig?
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