This is something I struggled with while being stranded. Do I keep going as I normally do, or do I pause and play? I like that you ended every line with "life on...". Was your whole family home, kids and spouse and all, or was it just you? Maybe you could add another verse so you have two on pause and two on play.
I really enjoyed your poem. When I read the title stranded, I assumed it would be about you being stuck somewhere. It was such a refreshing take on being stranded because of snow. I too love snow days! I liked your use of pause/play. Did you feel refreshed at the end? I think it could be neat to incorporate that into the last line.
This is something I struggled with while being stranded. Do I keep going as I normally do, or do I pause and play? I like that you ended every line with "life on...". Was your whole family home, kids and spouse and all, or was it just you? Maybe you could add another verse so you have two on pause and two on play.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem. When I read the title stranded, I assumed it would be about you being stuck somewhere. It was such a refreshing take on being stranded because of snow. I too love snow days! I liked your use of pause/play. Did you feel refreshed at the end? I think it could be neat to incorporate that into the last line.
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